UPPSC PCS - 2014

In which of the following sentence have the punctuation marks been used properly?

Year Asked: 2014

A
The blue dress was warmer, on the other hand the purple one was prettier
B
The blue dress was warmer, on the other hand, the purple one was prettier
C
The blue dress was warmer, the purple one, on the other hand, was prettier
D
None of the above

Correct Answer

D. None of the above

Detailed Explanation

Correct answer: D. None of the three sentences punctuates properly. Each joins two independent clauses with only a comma, which is a comma splice.

  • A: "The blue dress was warmer" and "the purple one was prettier" are both complete sentences, so a comma alone cannot join them. The transitional phrase "on the other hand" also lacks the commas that should set it off.
  • B: The comma before "on the other hand" does not fix the splice. The correct join is a semicolon: "The blue dress was warmer; on the other hand, the purple one was prettier."
  • C: The parenthetical is punctuated correctly, but the comma between the two clauses is still a splice. The correct form is "The blue dress was warmer; the purple one, on the other hand, was prettier."

Core concept: independent clauses are joined by a comma with a coordinating conjunction, or by a semicolon. Conjunctive adverbials such as "however" or "on the other hand" take a semicolon before them when they link two clauses. This sits in the Prelims English-language section and carries over into Mains essay and precis writing, where clean punctuation matters.

Trap: Aspirants see the commas around "on the other hand" in B and C and assume they are correct, without checking whether the two halves are independent clauses that need a semicolon.

This question appeared in UPPCS 2014 GS Paper 2.

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